More detail in this blog post. - Michael Habib

The presentation loses something without the voice over, few connections are made. You might be able to recover if you put text slides between the graphics, and pick out one element at a time to elaborate on. The auto-advance feature flicked to the next slide before the previous slide had been fully analyzed. Basically all I got from the presentation was the feeling that there was at least an experimental reference site somewhere called 2collaborate or something, and that Web 2.0 was interactive internet. - Graeme E. Smith

Thanks for your feedback Graeme. The voice over adds a lot of content, but the slides don't need to show that. You can come watch me speak to fill in the blanks, or read my Master's paper to get a better idea about my thoughts. There might be a video of the talk soon as well. - Michael Habib

Graeme, the videos are now up if you are still interested in the voice over: http://bit.ly/6VpsbX - Michael Habib