"Thanks for the feedback, Ian. Although I am sure it was merely a function of the common instinct to escape to a lower intensity of poison, I can't help but reflect on the "fearful symmetry" of the event/image. My summertime suburb as toxic grid . . ."
- Haiku Habits
"Thanks for the feedback, Kurt. I was trying to play with various sensations: ice, the hard “k”sound in vodka and cut, and the slowed-down ending produced by “flowers.” Glad to find it unexpected!"
- Haiku Habits
"Yep, something like that. Throughout my community, there are dead beetles along the curb. It seems they had just enough energy to make it out of the poisonous grass, then collapse in unison. It’s the symmetry of the dead that struck me most."
- Haiku Habits